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Exposition: One tool the author has to tell a story



Exposition is used in two ways when talking about fiction.

First, it is the set-up at the beginning of the plot arc. Where we learn the basic who, what, when, and where. This is a necessary part of plot to ground your reader.

I'm going to address the second way exposition is used in a story. This is when an author gives background information, description of characters or setting, or summarizes events that have already happened. It can happen at any point in the story. This is a necessary, key element of writing and one of the three tools an author has to tell his or her story, along with scene and dialogue.

A good author does this without slowing down the forward progress of the plot. That is, the exposition makes sense in the context of the scene (or action) of the story and does not trip up the reader or bore him or her.
She turned her blue gaze toward him.
Here, we get the fact that she has blue eyes in the context of the action. That's the best way to give description.

One mistake amateur writers make is including "infodumps" in their stories. These are paragraphs of exposition which trip up the reader and slow the forward progress of the plot. They take the reader out of the action. As a result, these infodumps can result in readers setting aside a book and giving up on a story.

Green Room
Green Room by Donna McNeely
One particular example of this is what I call "fantasy room." Young writers often use their fiction as a means to live out their own dreams and fantasies. Hence, their characters are about their age, if not a little older, and have things the writers wish they had, like perfect, awesome bedrooms. Young writers can spend a page describing a room: the bedding, the wall color, the drapes, the toys, the electronics... Everything you know a young writer would want in his or her own room. This is too much!

Sprinkling in a few relevant details is great, and necessary. It grounds the reader in setting and helps him or her envision the world the author is creating. But these details need to be intrinsic to the plot, and can't stop the forward momentum of the action. Does it really matter, in the grand scheme of the story, that the bedspread is green? Ask yourself that before including the detail in your story.

Comments

  1. this will help me alot in class! i definitly have a better understanding of exposition. this blog will help with my reading and writing classes. i hope there is another blog soon! thank you!

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  2. Thank you Mrs. Calsing. I will read this again tomorrow for hw.

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  3. Thanks Mrs.Calsing I reaaly have the TRUE meaning. I'll be happy if you post more. christian out

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  4. Thank you for the helpful information on expositions. I hope you get or reveiws on what you wrote. Thank you again.

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  5. thank you mrs calsing. This will help me a lot.

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  6. andrew birkby 3rd periodNovember 27, 2012 at 6:02 PM

    EPICNESS

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  7. Jay Seelig 3rd periodNovember 27, 2012 at 6:12 PM

    Thank you miss.Calsing!

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  8. I LIke your blog. It was very interesting. Now I know all about infodumps and expositions. Peace!

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  9. I loved your writing clues and info. I am going to be ready for that test.

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  10. thank you this will help me a lot ready for the test

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  11. I like your blog, I think it helped me understand more about exposition. LLAMAS RULE

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