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Sunday update

Well, the Saints trounced the Eagles, didn't they? Unfortunately, Bell received a knee injury, and things didn't look too good for him by the end of the game. I hope we have better news tomorrow.

That at least puts a happy ending on a week that otherwise was mostly disappointing. I had two rejections this week, but I'm fairly certain, with a little work, I can revise the two stories to fit other markets. If not, I'll just go ahead and post them on my site or here.

I'm also partway through Jeremy Purvis Sanson's Louisiana During World War II, which is the research I'm reading for my NaNoWriMo novel. The start of that is only a few weeks away now, and I have a few other projects to clear from my plate before the first of November arrives.

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  1. I just read your story over at Flashquake. Nice job. Sort of reminds me of "Some Of Us Had Been Threatening Our Friend Colby" by Donald Barthelme, except nowadays I don't think they've gone too far.

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