tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4335874032648742697.post6872726741289555289..comments2018-07-28T08:34:21.459-05:00Comments on Writer and Editor C.B. Calsing/ G.G. Royale: Show, Don't Tell!Corinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08751518371290032651noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4335874032648742697.post-11290053813354437672012-12-18T10:34:46.973-06:002012-12-18T10:34:46.973-06:00This story helped me so much. Now I know how to st...This story helped me so much. Now I know how to start a story. Thank you for infinity.... But one thing bothered me, I thouht we can't start with a date.Ashlynn Jamesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4335874032648742697.post-87670316261131145312012-12-06T18:11:30.023-06:002012-12-06T18:11:30.023-06:00cooler than the first oneandrew birkbycooler than the first one<br><br>andrew birkbyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4335874032648742697.post-57038827380098900552012-12-04T19:51:40.366-06:002012-12-04T19:51:40.366-06:00Thanks, i'll be able to write my story much be...Thanks, i'll be able to write my story much better with your help!<br>Jay Seelig P3noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4335874032648742697.post-44901079399551712852012-12-04T19:36:32.255-06:002012-12-04T19:36:32.255-06:00It does not make since you don`t use vary much det...It does not make since you don`t use vary much detail in the story why have it start like eric`s older brother will never forget June of 1943 that's how it should start and it should end like eric`s brother was injured the docter shows up with his injured brother they did not mind healing to gither. so eric`s brother finds out that the docter`s brother was injured because of the war. see it wasJalen downingnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4335874032648742697.post-62041899315150633322012-12-04T17:06:51.729-06:002012-12-04T17:06:51.729-06:00i love your storyi love your storyjessica urbannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4335874032648742697.post-41901818182025932952012-12-04T06:43:57.790-06:002012-12-04T06:43:57.790-06:00wow now i know what to watch out 4.show the story ...wow now i know what to watch out 4.show the story dont tell...keenonCollin Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03238377214350022839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4335874032648742697.post-31138211934115885052012-12-03T17:29:59.336-06:002012-12-03T17:29:59.336-06:00Woooooooooow this helped me alot. Now i really kno...Woooooooooow this helped me alot. Now i really know how to start a story. Thanks again and im hoping for another blogChristian Fordehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13378731793489337480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4335874032648742697.post-79196008372363799672012-12-03T16:51:54.739-06:002012-12-03T16:51:54.739-06:00This helped me understand how I should wright the ...This helped me understand how I should wright the beginning of my short story.Can't wait to score 100%taylor prattnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4335874032648742697.post-14667915528517457422012-12-03T16:25:31.221-06:002012-12-03T16:25:31.221-06:00that was a little hard to understand at first but ...that was a little hard to understand at first but then i read over it again and it made perfect sense.dakota woodwardnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4335874032648742697.post-24831714679050529522012-12-03T12:31:45.492-06:002012-12-03T12:31:45.492-06:00Wow, i like how you explained it. Thanks! i cant W...Wow, i like how you explained it. Thanks! i cant WAIT TO ACE THE TEST!Madison Ruffinnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4335874032648742697.post-32507983668550329872012-12-03T12:28:28.785-06:002012-12-03T12:28:28.785-06:00This is cool. It helps becuase im writing a short ...This is cool. It helps becuase im writing a short story too.<br>chasenoreply@blogger.com